翻译技巧—口译笔译中如何翻译复杂的中文句子
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　　每一个人，作为社会的一个成员，有权享受其人格和尊严的自由发展所必需的社会、经济、文化权利，这些权利是通过国家努力和国际合作来实现的，并且与所在国家的组织、资源、现状相一致。

　　对于这种比较复杂的中文句子，在正式翻译成英文句子之前，应当按照它的含义，将它划分成不同的部分，以便我们确定英文句子的结构。我首先将这个中文句子划分成6个部分，请特别注意，第4部分嵌套在第3部分中间。

　　①每一个人，②作为社会的一个成员，③有权享受 [④其人格和尊严的自由发展所必需的] 社会、经济、文化权利，⑤这些权利是通过国家努力和国际合作来实现的，⑥并且与所在国家的组织、资源、现状相一致。

　　这样划分之后，我初步决定，将第4、5、6部分翻译成三个定语从句，用来修饰第3部分的最后一个单词rights，请看：

　　①Everyone

　　②as a member of society

　　③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights

　　④which are necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity

　　⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation

　　⑥which are concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.

　　不过，在英语中，通常是一个定语从句修饰一个名词，很少有三个定语从句修饰一个名词，因此我临时决定，将第4部分改写成一个短语，将第5、6部分合并成一个定语句子，请看：

　　①Everyone

　　②as a member of society

　　③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights

　　④necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity

　　⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant withthe organization, resources and situation of each country.

　　最后，将这5个部分组合起来，就是这个中文句子的英文译文。

　　Everyone, as a member of society, is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rightsnecessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity, which arerealized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant with theorganization, resources and situation of each country.

　　另外，LT论坛的ptbptb网友另提供的一个版本如下：

　　Everyone, as a member of society, has the right to social security and is entitled torealization, through national effort and international co-operation and in accordance with theorganization and resources of each State, of the economic, social and cultural rightsindispensable for his dignity and the free development of his personality.